My Research
was about the cleanliness of New York city, throughout my research I have came
across a lot of important information, however I felt like there was
two part of the research I decided not to include in the final paper.
I felt like it wasn't important although it was relevant to my
topic I decided to to include these two sections.
One part my research paper I decided not to include in my
final paper was about the Cholera epidemics of 1832 in New York. New York
City had become one of the dirtiest city by the 19 century causing people to
become sick. The cholera epidemic killed thousands of people in Europe and
North America. According to Robert Mcnamara the cholera outbreak was caused by
the lack of proper sanitation, which does is not surprising because it was
later discovered by scientist that bacillus which is found in water was the
main reason for the cholera outbreak. The
lack of sanitation has been an issue in New York City for a very long time which
has caused others lives. I believe proper sanitation could of prevented the
cholera outbreak because if New Yorker toke actions and made sure their water
was being cleaned and also New Yonkers could of voiced their
opinion to have clean water to drink.
Another part of my research paper I decided not to
include in the final paper was about the tourist New York City and what they
think of New York City regarding the lack of sanitation's in the
streets. Tourist reviewed New York City as very dirt and smelly city. In a
survey they had said that they would often see piled up garbage’s on sidewalk.
According to Michael Howard about 11.4 million tourists has visited the united
states. I understand tourist is very important although they do have
their opinions, the tourist still would prefer new York city than any other
place . Tourist is good for the economies and so of course the mayor would like
to welcome a lot of visitors from outside the untied states. I think the reason
why I decided not to include this section of my paper is because I felt like
the tourist should stop judging and learn about how to help improve the poor
sanitation even though they may not be a resident of new York if the care so
much they should help. I “m not saying that one is not entitled to
its opinion I am just saying that instead of giving bad comments and reviews
why don’t you stand up and give solutions on how to help to the cleanliness of
new York city.
Work cited
Michael Howard "New York City sees Record High Tourism in 2013". December 10,2013
Wsj.com/news/Articles . Web May 17,2013.