Don t judge be positive

 My Research was about the cleanliness of New York city, throughout my research I have came across a lot of important information, however I felt like there was  two  part of the research I decided not to include in the final paper.  I felt like it wasn't important although it was relevant to my topic I decided to to include these two sections.

One part my research paper I decided not to include in my final paper was about the Cholera epidemics of 1832 in New York.  New York City had become one of the dirtiest city by the 19 century causing people to become sick. The cholera epidemic killed thousands of people in Europe and North America. According to Robert Mcnamara the cholera outbreak was caused by the lack of proper sanitation, which does is not surprising because it was later discovered by scientist that bacillus which is found in water was the main reason for the cholera outbreak.  The lack of sanitation has been an issue in New York City for a very long time which   has caused others lives. I believe proper sanitation could of prevented the cholera outbreak because if New Yorker toke actions and made sure their water was being cleaned and also New Yonkers could of voiced their opinion to have clean water to drink.

   Another part of my research paper I decided not to include in the final paper was about the tourist New York City and what they think of New York City regarding the lack of sanitation's in the streets. Tourist reviewed New York City as very dirt and smelly city. In a survey they had said that they would often see piled up garbage’s on sidewalk. According to Michael Howard about 11.4 million tourists has visited the united states.  I understand tourist is very important  although they do have their opinions, the tourist still would prefer new York city than any other place . Tourist is good for the economies and so of course the mayor would like to welcome a lot of visitors from outside the untied states. I think the reason why I decided not to include this section of my paper is because I felt like the tourist should stop judging and learn about how to help improve the poor sanitation even though they may not be a resident of new York if the care so much they should help.  I “m not saying that one is not  entitled to its opinion I am just saying that instead of giving bad comments and reviews why don’t you stand up and give solutions on how to help to the cleanliness of new York city. 

Work cited 

Michael Howard "New York City sees Record High Tourism in 2013". December 10,2013

Wsj.com/news/Articles . Web May 17,2013.